Part one: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/mNWy1
So after almost a year, here's a new update for this comic. Not sure if it was worth the wait though XD I changed my approach for this and did the inking traditionally, so some of the drawing may be a little bit less good as it took me some time to get use to it. I hope you won't mind :)
I still need to work on flow and panelling, and I also learned that I should planned the word bubble much earlier. I had trouble fitting some of them in certain of the panels due to poor planning. Lesson learned!